| I appreciate your work on... |
Start positively and acknowledge effort |
I appreciate your work on the sales forecast; the data is thorough. |
| One suggestion is... |
Offer a specific idea for improvement |
One suggestion is to add a short executive summary. |
| It would help if... |
Propose a concrete change |
It would help if you labeled the axes on the chart. |
| Could you consider...? |
Introduce a recommendation politely |
Could you consider simplifying the slide layout for clarity? |
| I noticed that... |
Point out an observation without blaming |
I noticed that some figures lack sources. |
| To improve this, try... |
Provide an actionable step |
To improve this, try using bullet points for key findings. |
| A minor point: |
Flag a small issue |
A minor point: the footer date needs updating. |
| Overall, well done; however... |
Balance praise with a constructive note |
Overall, well done; however, the conclusion could include clearer recommendations. |